To wander through life, alone
Is something far greater then Misery can describe
It is lucky then, that I have found my Twin Flame
That we wandered inter-working paths
Your love puts the words "I love you" to shame
They can't even measure halfway up
It all came wrapped up in a simple, lanky box
With brown hair on top
Brown eyes to match
And a voice not near as deep as the ocean
My eyes,
They wander.
Not to others, but to you.
Your coarse, sparse and wonderful Dirt Hair
My simple red pales in comparison
My eyes
A simple brown, no complexity
Are out done by the love that pours from yours
I am gratful that our paths intertwined,
It is a tragedy to wander alone.
Mistakes? Improvements that need to be made? Tips and tricks? I'd like some advice please.
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i saw because it has my name (James) as a tag on it. beautiful, haunting piece. it especially goes well with the song i'm listening to, "Low Estate" by 16 horsepower. i love the lines "my eyes wander./not to others, but to you." magnificent.
i also like the last two lines. those are the haunting ones i was referring to.
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