You knew just what you were doing
Hypocritical mind(end)games
In a torrential downpour *drip* *fuck*
Their lottery is played out
To :inbred: cheering
And copious amounts of
AUDIENCE PARTICIPATION
[insert applause here]
You just weren't sure why
It's all fun(&games)
Until you scrape the brains
from the bedside -concrete- wall
Adjectives [object-ives] fail
upon gray matters
I hate to have to tell you this
[shutthefuckupyoupieceofshitliarliarpatheticwhore]
Time bombs are a funny (little ditty)
Just don't watch them explode
they might take you down *with* them
It's not all in my mind
Falling back, words in thyme
They move me to silence
(that's a blatant lie)
Author notes
(because our fridge is stupid)
I'd really like some constructive criticism.
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pretty sweet
i didn't know you still used this site. this is the first time i've been on in a while. Maybe i should take it back up again.
So, i like it alot, but i have to say i've never been a fan of the way you have this laid out. I find it really distracting if there's too much going on aestetically (i know i spelled that way wrong). I generally prefer raw words, but i know sometimes you need extra punctuation to convey things appropriately. It's really good though.
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