You asked me not to hurt you -
I listened and I did what you said.
I never lied. I said nothing
Whenever I cannot come around
To be with you -
I was somewhere else
Engrossed with someone else,
His cock in my mouth,
Filling my tongue, plugging my throat
Deep enough
So these secrets
Spill out straight to the bottom,
Hidden in my gut
And will never reach my lips.
I would not let you
taste his bitterness
When I kiss you
with the same mouth.
These secrets will remain in the bowels
Of my heart.
You asked me not to hurt you -
I did and never said a word
Except when I say I love you.
Author notes
Wah... Guilt tripping.....
A contest entry
- erotic & psychotic by Immortal Obscurity.
400 points, ended November 26, 2008, 10 entries
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omg like i just read this and was WHOA! after i just replied to a comment that u replied to on your poem The Storm. lol
i didnt understand the whole thing with the "You asked me not to hurt you - I did and never said a word Except when I say I love you"...it seemed like you were implying that when you said i love you it was a lie. could that be it? lol dont tell me, its a pleasure to interpret amazing writes such as this.
thanks for sharing again! really really like this one
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awww it's nice again to hear your comment ^__^ okay,i won't tell you the interpretation ahha! actually,it's weird... i can't seem to write happy poems..almost all of my poems are always sad or erotic waaah... i'm currently in a relationship now but even though i love him so much, i can't pull enough inspiration from him to write poetry. don't get me wrong, i'm really happy with him. it's just that happy memories do not motivate and inspire me as much as sad painful memories when it comes to writing potery or short stories.. ^__^
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haha i know what you mean. i prefer the darker writes. they've got more depth and emotion that a lot of the happier writes. but its always nice to mix it up. but i actually think i write happier poems when im in darker moods. like i twist it and make it to where its something i want at that moment. i tried sadder, more angry poems and those dont seem to work as well with me XD although i'm quite proud of Crossing Bridges As They Burn.
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While this is very well-penned, I do have to admit I'm a tad curious as to the motivation behind this write; were you the cheater or the cheat-ee? Of course, I've probably misinterpreted this completely, as it's late andI'm falling asleep at my comp... Either way, well done, and thanks for entering
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