Trust in my skin; her shape told me to trust
See all; look and let your eyes sail my sea
Lust for my body; let me fill your lust
Me and you will be one; come inside me
Eyes delight; a sight brought tears to my eyes
Fears flee to desire to enrage my fears
Lies she near for pleasure, a treasure of lies
Tears of guilt and shame dry the mirth of tears
Trust in your sin; the snake told me to trust
Sail on the ocean of delight for sale
Bust to see; rear to buy; leave your soul bust
Frail fool find thrills in skin so frail
"Dust you are so you shall return to dust."
"Trust in me" said He who died, "live and trust."
Author notes
Picture Credit :Lust by Marta Dahlig
Written in the Shadow Sonnet Form invented by Amera M. Andersen.
In a list
A contest entry
- "Speaking of......." (CONTEST) by Paloszoo.
700 points, ended November 13, 2008, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oooops. And these are well deserving:
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Fantastic! You really took this contest and ran with it! Superb! Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you share your work here. Good luck!
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You have taken this most difficult form and made it yourr own, I think this is wonderful and the picture... Oh my, I love that dress.
Love,
Amera♥
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Aww sucks, Danks Teach. You da best.
I am sure you'd look sultry in that dress. Wow. Don't put that pic in my mind.
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