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Why

The Lord has taken my soul-mate from me suddenly.
How can I comprehend what has happened.
I am drowning in pain with no relief in sight.

Do I dare yell at our creator and question his motives.
Is there an answer for this pain our "Father"  has given me?
What can I learn from him?
Why is he so angry with me?
When will I see my beloved?

The loneliness darkens my heart.
Oh how I miss my dear one again?
All questions, no answers.

"Father" answer me in my solitude.

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  • Rheea gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    Why? Oh I have ask the question so many times. You poem is so real with the fear of questioning God and the frustration of the pain, confusion and anger one sorts out later by scripture.When time has passed. This is amazing to me, well written my friend!