Santa has a computer at the north pole ,
biggest computer ever sold .
Its actually the very first to be ever made ,
and he has a copy of everything today.
OOH he is watching and listening indeed ,
he has every-ones name in his computer you see.
He can click on your name and walla you are there ,
in all you say and do so do beware .
A little bell rings when one is doing bad ,
and Santa goes running to check out the lad.
He makes a little star out by your name ,
and for those doing bad an x he would place .
OOH he would shake his head and a tear would fall ,
then he would go and remove one gift that was for you after all .
The pile of gifts he set back last year ,
went to all the other kids filled with love and cheer .
Were you ugly to your friend or a stranger today ,
think about it and then tell me how many gifts did Santa take away.
Imagine if you were good the whole year through ,
how many gifts would be there under the tree for you .
Now I know you are very young and so excited most of the time ,
and remember when you get up out of bed feeling bad what gifts then will be mine .
To wake up with a smile is a sure fire way to have a good day,
and share with others around you its the only way .
For those times you are especially good ,
Santa places a star by your name as he should .
And for those children who help the homeless and the children in need,
believe me Grandma sends it in her letter and they get an extra star indeed .
Author notes
#5 How does santa decide on who is good or bad . Does he have spies watching for him
A contest entry
- #159 A Little Christmas fun: prompt contest by daviscth.
725 points, ended December 1, 2008, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a wonderful take on the prompt and your poem holds a beautiful message for everyone. Thanks so much for posting.
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this is a beautiful poem hon... one every kid should read i think... a good lesson too
must be why i never get any pressies... im a bad bad girl lol
hugs,
georgie,
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This is great as the kids of today have never known life without computers.
How do you just keep rolling out these wonderful poems?
You are truely blessed!
Moon
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Oh this marvellous and very, very cleverly written in an age such as ours!!!
, I saw this on my front page - new by favourites and didnt take a second to click on it! lol! I knew for sure this would be fun! A ver sweet write! 
thanks for writing this marvellous, truly marvellous write!
God bless, feels like Christmas already, as if its not!!!
Love and light,
Lencio
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this is so lovely, andcleverly written, i will read it to my youngsters tonight thanks and have a beautiful day
theresa
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Awesome poem, my dearest mother. Good luck in the contest.
Your AP son,
Tyler
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