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Accusing Fingers

Hold that pointing finger firm
                              Directly at the accused
                                Decisively at that diminutive source
                                                          from whence this world has moved

A contest entry

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  • Plastic Dreams
    December 20, 2008

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    this was definately short and sweet. i enjoyed it and what it brought to the table. i can't give too much constructive criticism because there's not an entirity to it. i feel like this piece could go many ways. well written though. thanks!


  • Hikari Lady
    December 19, 2008

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    I love the rythme and the amazing meaning behind this write. Short, deep and to the point with great imagery.
    A great read indeed.

    Love&Peace
    ~Noor


  • dove94
    December 16, 2008

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    ooooh i get chills.
    this is so brief, but its very interesting.
    i love this, gooood job
    :]


  • Rhythm Child
    December 15, 2008

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    ill comment again
    i liked the fact that this was very ambiguous and it would appeal to all peoples

    great write tam

    *dimunative


  • Rhythm Child
    November 22, 2008
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    the layout was brilliant, the meaning was very thought provoking and i loved the flow
    a truly great poem


  • Sandal
    November 12, 2008

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    I like this, because of "diminutive source"; it seems we get worked up a lot about very little. Critics are especially prone. Good luck!

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