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To look again to sea,
Your chance meeting of me,
No longer are we there,
I stand alone and stare,
The war has taken much,
I’m missing most your touch.
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Missing you…
Wandika 11-11-2008
Author notes
Picture:http://frozenstarro.deviantart.com/art/Guardian-of-Legends-102831168
A contest entry
- Quickie! Are You Bored? by Sweet Impatience.
980 points, ended November 11, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this poem tugged on my heart. such a sad piece, on that's a very emotional write. excellent piece.
good luck
kat
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Thank you very much
I appreciate your words.
Jim
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Aww.. a very poignant write as many must feel this way after war has wrought its price! Excellent write.
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Thank you.
I appreciate the comment.
Jim
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There are times when a few words can convay so much more.You could have added to this poem but it would not have made it any better
A good poet knows when to stop.
Excellent my friend
Good luck in the contest
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So I've seen
For all your words my friend...
you answer just a bit.
I respect that
but would still visit if allowed.
Janet and I still are planning on trip next summer
Missouri to New York
Queen Mary from NY to London
some time in Jolly Ol' England
To Ireland and back to NY and home.
probably in August. Tomatoes should be ripe eh!
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Whoa Short and sweet bro.
J is one lucky woman
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Thanks
30 word quicky.
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