The edges of my world recede;
within myself I have no needs.
When I finally succeed…
from loneliness, my heart bleeds.
“Rescue me” I hear it plead.
Author notes
No man (or woman) is an island...
Option 3.
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: http://softreply.deviantart.com/art/abstract-44299106
30 words (27 used 
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A contest entry
- Quickie! Are You Bored? by Sweet Impatience.
980 points, ended November 11, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome but I Won't Turn Down Fluffy One's Either :D
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Very Well Said
Ths is worthy of the bronze and congradulations on it. Your take was excellent, Michele
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Congrats the Bronze. Liked the direction you took the prompt. Very nice read indeed.
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Thank you... kind words are always appreciated.
Ken
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I found your interpretation of the prompt to be very interesting. I enjoyed it immensely. the last line is excellent
“Rescue me” I hear it plead." so many times in life I've heard that, but there have been many times I've ignored it too.. or perhaps couldn't hear it..
Good luck
kat
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Well wow Ken. Just come right out, and bammo!
Right in the kisser
LOL
NIIIICE, man.
Nice,
much love.
jin
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Can't fluff, man- I'm on house restriction! Couldn't have liked the write any more, though. End-rhyme stole it.
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excellent take
best of luck!
Tasha
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Wow, this poem is wonderful! I love the deep meaning of it and that photo is just weird! But you made it come to live and be beautiful with only your words!
Best of luck!
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We both used the same prompt I love your take on this thanks for sharing good luck in the contest be well.
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Loving the rhyme!! A splendid take on that picture... I have felt this many times.
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“Rescue me” I hear it plead.
~ Sadly, when many of us are in this state we are too far gone to hear the near-faint voice within...
Nicely done ~ different take of the same pic
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