Though her heart was broken
Her greatest fear was faced
She destroyed her agressor
Now her life at ease
She stood atop the cliffside
and let his memory evaporate
Author notes
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option 2
A contest entry
- Quickie! Are You Bored? by Sweet Impatience.
980 points, ended November 11, 2008, 15 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You did a fantastic job with this poem... I love this one.. yes letting his memory disappear is a good thing. the imagery is vivid and heart tugging.. you did a great job with this prompt
good luck
kat
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Yes, sometimes we need to destroy the remants of our aggressors to find that ease. Well done!
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Nicely done... a powerful story with a happy ending
Well done and best of luck.
Ken
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