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You Hold Me In Your Hands God

You hold me in your hands
To keep me safe from everyday

You hold me in your hands
Because you love me

You hold me in your hands
Because you care about me

You hold me in your hands
To shield me from the bad things

You hold me in your hands
To lead me in the right direction

You hold me in your hands
Because you are Holy

You hold me in your hands
Because you are my Heavenly Father

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    Yes, how true...Your couplets all say something that is powerful! Just like steps on a stair...each one takes one closer to God if we just believe it, and practise all who God is to us...In believing Him, putting our trust in Him and all He can be to us, we have no other need...Very well written...Write on young poet!

  • Amethyst MoonShadow
    November 11, 2008

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    He really is our everything. Teacher, Protector, Counselor etc...
    You describe all that He is very nicely. This is really nice to read!