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A Child



Child of the sands
left behind by time
has no words to speak
eyes say all in mime

Crime of the centuries
a never ending plight
a child born upon one Earth
has no future in sight

This scene is everywhere
don’t dare to close your eyes
for wherever you may live
they exist through all your lies

Go ahead and turn away
like so many have before you
as you live in your luxury
some one else wears your shoe

Pretend it is continental
and that it could not happen here
with a mouth swollen of food
you can’t hide your ugly fear

Wake up and smell the roses
they’re living in your streets
not asking for any excuses
in a world that’s filled with cheats














Author notes

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  • chilali
    November 13, 2008

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    Wow. This was just incredible. Brilliantly penned! I loved it. Thank you ever so much for your beautiful entry and good luck


  • sol-luna
    November 12, 2008
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    i love your entry. well said.


  • Canadamomma
    November 11, 2008
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    deep take on the prompt; flows very well together
    best of luck in the contest


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    November 11, 2008

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    So moving is this poem
    The sights your words portray fill me with such sadness
    How true your poetical voice echo's
    Thought provoking
    Best wishes to you in the contest
    Julie

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