A face clean of scars
which are only hidden beneath
will cry out to be heard
so it is written by the stars
Eyes penetrate into the soul
and learns of bitter thoughts
whom caress those gullible enough
to create barriers and deny truth
Now this angel of light is gone
for it's sight is set lower
a new generation is sought
because all hope seems to be lost
Author notes
Option 1
Picture Credit: http://th05.deviantart.com/fs38/300W/f/2008/315/9/9/warrior_is_a_child_by_hersley.jpg
No more than 150 words were used.
A contest entry
- *Ahem* In the mood for a quickie? Come in and join the fun! ^_^ by ylova.
800 points, ended November 13, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
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This is just awesome. I loved it. Amazing take on the prompt. This write is so intense and filled with power. I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for entering and good luck
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this is really goooodddd!!!!!!!!!!!
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wonderful write; powerful
Best of luck in the contest
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amazing
A write that truly slows your breath while your heart takes time to cry. well done. fine read
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Beautiful. It's too well written to describe but I can understand it and it's amazing. Great job! Good luck in the contest!
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