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Cream In My Coffee. (Triolet)

She's the cream in my coffee
The icing on my chocolate cake
The salt in my salt water toffee
She's the cream in my coffee
Never ever a turn-off-me
A pleasure my life does make
She's the cream in my coffee
The icing on my chocolate cake

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Prompt 16.She's the cream in my coffrr

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  • daviscth silver member
    November 16, 2008

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    LOL. I really enjoyed reading this and you did a great job with your chosen prompt. Thanks so much for sharing with me.


  • Commodore Rouge
    November 11, 2008
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    Awesome! I rarely read triolets on here, so I appreciated reading this. And of course, it touched on love, but most importantly, coffee! One can never go wrong when speaking kindly about coffee. Too bad we have no chocolate creamer left in the house today. Lol. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed reading, and best of luck in the contest!