Taste me
Hear me
Feel me
See me
Hold me
Do whatever you want,
just make the night go away,
I'll be safe in your arms,
if you let me.
(Let me cry)
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Option 3.
A contest entry
- Quickie! Are You Bored? by Sweet Impatience.
980 points, ended November 11, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What are your thoughts?
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I love this, it's very endearing.
Sad, and depressing..but wonderful at the exact same moment.
Short and sweet, you get your point across.
Make the night go away, open arms don't solve all the problems in the world.
However, you sure make it seem that way.
Flawless.
Brilliant.
Keep it up.
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While a night spent in the gentle care of someones caress doesn't solve every problem in the world, it does give you room and a moment to breathe.
Hold me, because I need it.
Hold me, because I want it.
Hold me, because I need you.
Hold me, because I want you.
Thank you.
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I offer my arms overseas.
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I really like your take on the prompt. ahh I understand that need to be held.. the need to feel safe. excellent job with your poem.
good luck
kat
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Totally missed that, woops.
Mistake corrected. -
Not sure what option this is for.. but something we'd all want.. to be held safe.
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I really like the flow and the emotions... I'm just not sure what prompt you were writing to. My guess - Option 3. You need to add it to your AN's.
Well done.
Ken
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umm...hmm..
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