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Is that cream I taste?

What a fine stimulation flowing through my veins
Hands secretly selecting through Coffee Arabica

Dark skin darker than Godiva’s boldest chocolate
A taste of caffeine has me spinning out of control

A kiss, my life turns upside down
I can trace a hint of cream-

Creamer than the percentage outline,
Creamer than your soft eyes.

Swirling around the cup
Creating a vortex in my life

Such silkiness to your glaze
Seeking mine in shadows.

Black Arabia’s coffee lingering,
Somehow such sweetness in your kiss.

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16 She’s/he’s the cream in my coffee

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  • daviscth silver member
    November 16, 2008

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    I really enjoyed your take on your chosen prompt. This has wonderful imagery. Thanks for sharing in my contest.