He deserved it.
The pain I can cause.
My powerful side.
He gave me no choice.
He had to die.
Author notes
Option B.
I would prolly take what i was alergic to and just eat it cuz i'm alergic to sulfa drugs and all it does is give me hives. haha. God I hate clowns tho. =[
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I love it ^-^
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How can you say so much in such little amounts of words.
TRULY AMAZING. lovvvvved it.
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Wow, this is so dark and amazing! I really like this poem. Keep it up!
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Thank you for your deep entry, Josie
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Nice poem, nicely written well done.
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good use of the pre-write. The ending was not a surprise but it came with a bang. thank you for your entery
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Something I can totally relate to! You expressed yourself so well in so few words.
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i liked the length and the rhyme, the idea behind this poem was also great
a very well written poem
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this is great, short, powerful, gives you shivers...
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wow this is certainly powerful it truly befits the title, the short lines in this make it more pognant, and the last line is a perfect closure exellen write i salute you
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aww a powerful picture that you've penned with your words.
excellent take on the prompt. I do need to point out however that there is a 30 word limit. you only have 20. I would really like you to come back & expand on this .. I am however judging this contest tonight.
kat
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Ahhh sweet revenge lol. Something we'd all wish at times no doubt!
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um, scary much? lol. you got the scare factor for sure.
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As she wipes her blade off... A powerful tale of spirit and strength... Well done.
Ken
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omg ur mad lol i love it lol randomness
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