Frozen sculptures
who once breathed
seek revenge on the living
drawing blood from
sleeping innocents
in an effort to resurrect
their stiff aching bodies
restoring youthfulness
to their icy presence
Author notes
30 Words
Prompt: http://freaky665.deviantart.com/art/Infected-103018975
A contest entry
- Quickie! Are You Bored? by Sweet Impatience.
980 points, ended November 11, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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OMG thats freakin beautiful man. I love this one. The life stealing and beauty leechers. Great write man, grats on the silver
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you have done something great with this pic, you brought it to life, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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the imagery throughout this poem is vivid and excellent. I love the first stanza, the second and yes the third too.. ok I love the whole thing. Outstanding take on the prompt
good luck
kat
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Jeremy! This is wonderful. Dark and scary too. Boy, you sure weren't kidding about the different scopes here
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This is something else, and no sir I am afraid yours is so much better.
What's up with that?
LOL
Best wishes sir
Jin
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Brilliant work, great take on the prompt, good luck and thanks for using allpoetry to highlight the genius of your work!
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interesting ~ and creepy! ~ take! nicely done ~
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Now I'm watching for bats, dammit... Enjoyed the write!
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cool take
best of luck hun
Tasha
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so that's where my blood has been going!! lol
Excellent dark take bro!
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creepy.
helen~
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Darkly done, my friend... I can feel the cold touch others as I read your words. Excellent take and telling...
Ken
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