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Forever

Forever is a word i cant describe,

it eludes me like a leaf in the wind,

full of definitions that circumscribe,

just enough to keep these eyes skinned,

forced within to jibe,

bled to rescind,

another turn to release the vibe,

left to be chagrin,

forever is a word that tends no bribe.

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  • greyhaime silver member
    November 12, 2008

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    I liked the rythem of this poem, it speaks of a word so used and often not meant.thanks for sharing this with us here.
    cheers.


  • kitsmith
    November 11, 2008

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    forever is a bribe... just an observation. "I'll stay with you forever... I just want..." Yeah, but that's my own past pain. Great poem.. Short, but good.