My heart swells when I hear your name,
In my eyes no one can surpass your fame.
When I'm in your arms, my heart starts to sing,
Baby, you are my everything.
There has never been a love so true,
Like the burning passion that I feel for you.
There are not enough words I could say,
That would describe the adoration that I feel every day.
You are the fire that warms up my heart,
It rips me to pieces when we have to part.
So trust me, baby, I'll never leave your side,
And yes my dear Michael, I will be your wife!
Author notes
I know that this all sounds really corny, but actually this has not happened to me...yet. This was all just a dream and I woke up and wrote this in the middle of the night last night because I drempt that my boyfriend Michael asked me to marry him. In all actuallity, he hasn't, but I was in such a good mood that I wrote this. I hope that you like it, either way, let me know.
demonic.chanel.420
Option 3
A contest entry
- Love poetry by Reanna Eryn.
400 points, ended April 7, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Sadness
I am sorry that it was only a dream.
And things are not as they seem!
I feel all of the love and passion in this one! It captures the moment perfectly! I just wish you was dreaming on my pillow that night!
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This is sweet in it's corniness, and the rhyme is welll done. Thank you for the entry!
-Lena (grumpybrat20's co-judge) -
Hey this was cool
Hey loved it , Stevie
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Thank you for your entry.
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