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To Please You

Silent screams
inside my head.
As I lay in wait
upon my bed.

Wanting you so badly
as you stand there teasing.
The sight of you naked
is so damn pleasing.

Your cock in your hand
growing hard and demanding.
The length and girth
continuously expanding.

My pussy now
is sloppy wet.
As I slip my hand between my legs
and my clit I begin to pet.

Panting harder
I see the pre-cum on the tip
My mouth waters as
I beg your for a sip.

Come here baby
I beg some more.
Let me taste you
let me be your whore.

Take my fingers out
of my dripping cunt.
Bring them up towards your lips
but hold them just in front.

You want to taste baby?
as I bring my fingers to my lips
Put them in my mouth
and suck on just the tips.

Your watching
my every move.
Do I turn you on baby?
do you approve?

Fingers back inside me
bring a nipple to my tongue.
Now I see your cock
has really sprung.

Fingering my cunt
tonguing my nipple.
Orgasm nearing
movements start to triple.

My eyes locked on yours
watching me bring myself such pleasure.
Your licking your lips
you want a piece of this treasure?

I bring myself to orgasm
screaming out your name.
Now it's your turn baby
I want to watch as you do the same.

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  • Bruce silver member
    September 25
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    This is a beautifully written fantasy, hun!

  • mcfreeman
    November 15, 2008
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    Like finding buried treasure

    a gem and a nugget....

  • Diamond Girl
    November 12, 2008
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    Wow is all I can say!!


    • sensualbutterfly
      November 12, 2008
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      I take that as a good comment?! LOL! Thanks for the comment and the read. I appreciate it


  • LadySerenity
    November 11, 2008
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    I am at a loss for words. Great write WOW


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 11, 2008
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    HOLY!!

    Gawwwwwwwwddd!!! whew, i'mma imma imma uhmm... at a lost for splurge! l.o.l.

  • mcfreeman
    November 11, 2008
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    Amazing....

    one of the hottest writes I've becum red by....


  • carl dunford
    November 11, 2008

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    Yes please!

    I think I need to take a shower lol.
    that is one " pleasing piece of art, as only you can do!
    You are truly amazing! Carl xxxxxxx.

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