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a little word

one little word
spoken at another
so small and insignificant

that little word
soon becomes two
still only two right
its still not that big

what is this
I did what?
i never did that
how did this start

go back to the source
how did this happen
it all came
from that one little word

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  • SeptemberFaith
    December 22, 2008

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    I would have liked to know what the word was and what the effect of that word was.. but still, I think you got the idea of the butterfly effect.

    Criss

  • Rmh4933
    November 11, 2008
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    amazing

    they get bigger still and linger longer, well done