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Can I be...

I want be the only one you choose,
I want to be that bad habit you can't bare to lose,
If I could be the only one you think about,
That one person you never want to be without,
I promise I'd be yours forever.

Whenever you're near,
I'm brought close to tears,
Just to see the beautiful smile.

Can I be your favourite style?
Can I be the one you admire?
The one you desire?
And the one you're proud to call your own.

Author notes

Tried rhyming, might stop now.


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  • alexandra.
    November 11, 2008

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    Emily, you're good at reading people,
    Tell me why I find your writes so fxcking lovely?
    Constantly.


    Lovely lines, great rhyme.
    xxxxxx