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When You and I

When I am in dark
Then you are in light,
When I am very weak
Then you want to do fight.

When I am in problem
Then you become happy,
When I want to drink tea
Then you want coffee.

When I watch drama
Then you watch movie,
When I do gardening
Then traveling is your hobby.

When I am thirsty
Then you are in river;
When I want to swimming
Then you say, never !

When I look at you
Then you become angry
When I offer you dinner
Then you never hungry !!

When I love you
Then you love other..
When I want to make you girlfriend
Then you say I am like your brother !!!

What is your feelings?

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