Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Deep Light

Missing image
She is the High Priestess of the Deep Light
From the world of the immortal by birth right.

Descending into the sea for cleansing of Her soul
Before entering to defeat the castles betrothed.

As She has before, She will return to the serpents coil
In ecstasy She will triumph over evil that has soiled

The very essence of what once was sacred and divine
Chanting the Warrior’s Wyrd in rhythm and in rhyme.

As Woman She will conquer them without lifting a hand
In violence or anger as those She defeats, She will command,

With the inner light of the Goddess Herself, with the God
In His bright carriage of the eternal sun and the sacred rod,

That spews forth the blue light of Zeus in electricity.
Engulfing all who oppose them in complete ecstasy

Of the divine power from the moon and the sun.
Earth will receive the greatest gift of emotion

In logical aspects that humans comprehend.
As in circular time their minds finally begin

To evolve and develop to their full potential,
For the greater good of all in finite detail.

The time has come
To receive full sum

All ye have done or sought
In dreams of pure thought

Thy intent will be thy reward earned
As all ye have given will be returned.

Author notes

The artist is : Jim Warren
Title of painting: The Calling

In a list

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 7 of 7

  • Dark Otter
    November 20, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    A deserved finalist!

    It contains your style and is a unique take on the prompt. I wish you well in the contest.


  • KayJay
    November 17, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Very nicely done... a wonderful tale well told.
    Best of luck.
    Ken


  • ennovy silver member
    November 17, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    You captured the picture in some most wonderful words....and lovely story in verse....Thank you for entering our contest...Novy & Brazos


    • DragonBlue gold member
      November 18, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      Thank you for your kind words of encouragement.

      BB~
      )O(
      db


  • Blueskywonder
    November 11, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Such a detailed and meaningful piece of poetry that sings with the fulness of insightss, and awareness of true self. I love the power portrayed and the femenin wisdom nurtured. A truly beautiful piece of poetry full of enchanting imagery taking the mind on a journey of complete discovery. This is music for a dance which spans the whole of space and time. You are of the divine!
    Thank-you for sharing such magical thoughts wisdom and insight with us.
    Such an inspiration, Oh wise Powerful Dragon of Cobalt Blue, blessed with the wisdom of every generation sacred and true


    • DragonBlue gold member
      November 18, 2008
      Edit | Reply
      You're much too kind to me my friend. Thank you for reviewing my work.

      BB~
      )O(
      db

1 - 7 of 7