in the past where all who have loved me sat around me, laughing and having fun.
where honesty and honor between friends was something that was regarded,
and the love was enough to keep it as honest as all friends should be.
though never perfect, just really great, my heart will always stay in the past.
A contest entry
- I Left My Heart In ________ by poet2angels.
700 points, ended November 23, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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touching poem! I love where the prompt led you and I hope that your future will one day be much brighter for you than even your past!
Lynda
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moving
very deep, at least you have one that makes you want to stay , visit it often,excellent job, read it three times, lovely.
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