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Imagine us


Imagine us in love and lust
See the flowers
Taste the wind

Imagine us and where we’ve been
The lives we live
The wonders we’ve seen

Imagine the children we could have
Them growing up and doing fine
The rivers they’ll cross the hills they’ll climb

Imagine a house where we could live
The friends we’d have who bask in our glow
The gardens we’d plant and watch them grow

Imagine the families we would share
The nieces and nephews
The old and the young
The reunion we’d have with both of us there

Imagine us growing old
In ambers light
Our love still burning bright

Imagine us to the vary end
If you hadn’t married my best friend

Imagine!!!!

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by jogn

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  • darkchemgirl
    November 11, 2008

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    Nice.

    My first thought was aw this is about your loved one which It was melting my heart.Then at the very end it was different but it was going to longing to a kick in the butt funny. You did a good job. Very well done.