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Autumn's Genocide

Lively skeletons
lift their barren arms
and release confetti
against the moaning sky.
Sucking life and stealing colour-
exhaling in gusts of chilling cries.
And I march upon
their dried corpses again
but soon they’ll replenish
the earth from which
they came.

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  • etoile
    November 17, 2008

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    wow this was very well written, the imagery was amazing. and your take on the prompt was very unique and brilliant. i liked this a lot.

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • nearlycivilized
    November 13, 2008

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    wow
    you managed to use a dark description to paint a vibrant picture. I think your portrayal of autumn is very original. Well done!