Sadness of a bride
The depths of her soul fills the air with pain.
I do not see you my love, you have gone astray.
Be as it may for I shall no longer feel your gentle touch.
Sweet lover, in hopes that I may find you once more.
Wait for me in the havens, on a cloud not far form my reach.
As your bride I shall never love again.
Knowing that my days will come to an end.
And that sweet angel is when our life begins.
Author notes
Picture Credit: http://th06.deviantart.com/fs20/300W/i/2007/284/e/1/Solitude_by_angelandluci.jpg
A contest entry
- *Ahem* In the mood for a quickie? Come in and join the fun! ^_^ by chilali.
800 points, ended November 13, 2008, 19 entries
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Oh how so very sad!
Great job with this piece, the emotions here leak off the page! Fantastic write, alot packed into so few words.
Bravo
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Beautifully penned! lovely imagery! great work and good luck in the contest!
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ty so much
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Wow. So beautiful. Nicely penned. Great take on the prompt Thank you for entering and good luck
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thanx
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wonderful take on the prompt chosen, best of luck in the contest
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thanx so much
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This is a beautiful take on the picture prompt. I enjoyed reading it. Just one quick thing to help you out...I think by fells you mean fills.... Good luck and read mine if you can
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thanx so much for the coment and the help
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