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Just Another Day

Waking
bare feet touching floor
eyes closed , yet I see
for I have done this before

mind filling for the day
while I shuffle myself to the bathroom
where all days begin
eyes open, so I won't hit the door

breakfast is my first thought
warm coffee
other then that
my stomach churns

no one here but me
another day alone
with my computer
and words

silence, yet life moves
I hear it outside
as my deceased body sits
writing

nothing left
except me
words
some life

Bedtime
shuffle to crawl in
pillow cool to the face
eyes close til tomorrow...

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  • Still Standing gold member
    January 11

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    touching

    I can't explain the emotions I feel and the images that come to mind. I see your in the group people with disabilites and so this made this more touching and visual for me. Very introspective and personal thank u for sharing apeice of ur life with us.


  • jcat gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    You did a wonderful job describing my days...LOL...Now I am searching my house for the hidden cameras!! This was an excellent entry and I thank you for your patience while I commented!


  • HeavensDaughter
    November 12, 2008

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    What a sad day and life this poem describes. I hope it is not true to your life.

    Powerful imagery here:

    "silence, yet life moves
    I hear it outside
    as my deceased body sits
    writing"