i came from the east
you slept in the west
and some where on
the road our paths crossed
discussions started
revelations took place
and we speak
rhymes exchanged
comments thickening
our plot thickened
every thing shared
what was the start?
what was the spark,
to our flame?
the poetry we saw in each other...
Author notes
you asked and i abided.
this is what you get.
A contest entry
- And Here I Remain! (2 year anaversary) by Cube.
500 points, ended November 19, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
is this how you remember it?
Comments
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"the poetry we saw in each other" very beautiful!
+ cheers for commenting on my poem - hope your not too eager to punch me!
great write
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aww i love this, this touched my heart so much it made me sneeze... =-]
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love it.
you should write a 2nd part... using north and south...
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it is good to see that you are back and i have to say you haven't lost it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest, good luck in the contest
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i really liked it dr cube is cool!
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