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Essence

Your essence..
touches me to the core
My heart beats love
Mind, races with thoughts of us together
never knew....
never thought....
that this.............
Emotions intertwined like silk and needles
Sharp points prick at my being
amongst passion and kisses
I feel for you dearly my love

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  • Erica Carnea
    March 24

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    'Emotions intertwined like silk and needles'
    I love this write!
    amazong well done
    Erica Carnea
    xx

  • Rmh4933
    November 11, 2008
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    Deep, "silk and needles" ... love this write


  • Jane Eyre
    November 11, 2008
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    Beautiful! Goodness, I always seem to be able to relate to your poems in some way or another..cool!