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not ready for p.s. except ferment unripe these days

a clap dissonance / resonance
and a pet grasshopper held by
someone else made that noise… to floor alive
love
way my miscarriage identity comes activated
when quieted so cry comes on like kiss wanted…

I'm using it not just answering him
without vice versa vibration enough
these thirty days for business
no comparison this month
of never vacation grief
like to insect whimsicalness
don't overpersonify pursed~
except in hope, you know direction
to street where size can show it right
from womb's drawing board
ing
word for restoration time
in out imagination 'engineering'

provisions more than raise shirt
I can share to those flowing past
advertisements for breastfeeding
to stop spontaneously aborted natural  comfort zone
unaccosted in ponchoed springy neckline or bosom's tank top stretch to side

Author notes

I have way too much on my list that I should be interrupted ~
overboard in one word...

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    November 13, 2008
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    I like the way the alliteration in this piece smooths the flow and enhances the natural rhythm of this piece ... the 'miscarriage / aborted' imagery is well done and provides a good framework for this piece - an interesting piece

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    Polly