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Interior Temple

Crystallin pyramid
fragile at its base;
enceinte for the upper chambers of my heart to
the crown of my head, wherein lies
the interior temple of my being


Therein,
should I still myself in darkness;
like water, my soul imbibes the
wisdom of the Holy Spirit-
I hear Love’s whisperings
I feel Love’s rapture

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 13, 2008

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    Ah..quite a soft journey of the words bringing the secrets of the love around..just a wonderful piece you brought..well done...


    • Mary O gold member
      November 13, 2008
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      Oh, my gosh, I'm so surprised. Thank you so much I'm honored.
      ~Mary O

  • Amethyst MoonShadow
    November 11, 2008

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    These words gave a serene like feeling while reading. Eternal pleasure of God's love really is enrapturing. Good luck in the contest.


  • Jalalbad gold member
    November 11, 2008

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    a great poem, full of divine revelation. good luck in the contest