So, my favorite guys got together to have a party
they said,
they would throw it in my honor!
I would've never expected this!
The six current dwarfs got together to plan the event. Suicidal, the seventh dwarf had wandered off into the woods and still hadn't returned. He was known to wander off a lot.
Frustration, Anxiety, Impatience, Nerves, Timidity and Stress all sat down together to decide how they would make it special. Anxiety was feeling miserable so he was popping pills left and right to try to produce the 'happy feeling'. Impatience began to bang the table, "Can't we hurry this up, I have a large tankard of ale that awaits me at the local tavern. I would like to be blottoed by sundown." Nerves jumped off his seat in fear and began to mumble to himself, "this guy is getting on my last neural transmitter." Sitting down he shook his head and began to talk to himself. Timidity just started to shake his head, afraid to speak. He just went along with whatever the group wanted. Stress sat in his chair clutching the seat, his fists balled tight. His face became redder and redder as he became angrier and angrier. His thoughts were, maybe if I just bashed a few heads together, I could relieve these feelings I have. That picture soothed the andrenaline rush he was feeling.
Frustration finally piped in. C'mon guys! It ain't about us. Its all about our favorite party girl "Not so Snowy White." Let's work together for someone else other than ourselves.
And believe it or not they did.
Author notes
I thought you needed a funny story to feel better.
A contest entry
- Frustration by Polaja.
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Comments
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Ok this was definately different. It gave me a giggle. You have written a very good short story here but I think it could of used more to it. Thank you for entering and Thank you for sharing
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Haha. I like it, it's funny.
I really like the concept... kinda clever =]
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ummm....*scratched head with a puzzled look* wtf? ok its a good story but really wierd..........i like it good work
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this is a great little story 
... I really like the way it has all the essential elements of a good fairytale - just a little twisted - the ending is beautiful and happy in its own way 
interesting place your muse took you here!
Thank you for entering
Polly
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Loved it!
This was good it made me laugh in agreement!...loved how you took a well known (and loved) fable & twisted it to the dark side! Well done!
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