bloodshot dreams invade
every part of me
wicked laughter consumes me
swallowing me whole
inner voices speak louder
then the evil screams
that fill my brain
under suspicion all the time
all i want is to live my life
vulgar thoughts run through my head
why cant they let me be
evil lives here in my heart
where love use to reside
darkness hides in me
where light use to be bright
abuse lives on in my heart
make it stop
schizophrenic conversations
play on in my head
pretty strange thoughts
corroding my mentality
as thoughts of you linger on
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Just arrived by special delivery by Black Rayne.
500 points, ended November 12, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - prewrites (auditions for rounds contest) <33 by dieu..
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Comments
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beautiful.... and I bet you lived this poem..
I'm so sorry... Your friend in Poetry... JackReed3...
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Thank you again dear friend.
yes unfortunately i have.
fire
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Awesome...
And words I can very much relate too...
Its speaks so much of living on the edge, caught twix't sanity & darkness...
Impressive work as always...
Well penned, well versed, well done!!!
PS: Awesome pic to draw from...
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Thank you bro
i am so glad you enjoyed this piece
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Wow this was pretty, deep, the voice es in your head... This peice really reached out and touched me more then you will ever know dear! the darkness in it lingering in each word, with more mystery then the previous line, out standing, this has to be my farovite so far!
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This is one of my favorites to.
It says so much about my state of mind at that time and sometimes in between sanity..lol
Thank you for another wonderful comment hun i enjoy them
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So very dark and orginial...very strong thoughts and imagery for this pic...wonderful as always.
Congrat's on the well deserved Gold!
mystic
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Thank you my dear friend
glad you enjoyed
thank you for taking the time to read and to leave me a wonderful comment
fire
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Congrats on the well deserved Gold!!!
Damn you should have got two of them for this!!!
Exceptional!!!
Thanks for sharing
~Pastel
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my dear friend you always know how to make me feel better.
thank you so much for this wonderful comment.
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i really enjoyed this, you put it together with vivid adjectives and an original idea. great word use by the way, i'm hoping to go into the writing field and i love it when people use words i don't hear often anymore like "vulgar" and "schizophrenic" :]
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read
Thank you for the wonderful comment means a lot.
This is one of my favorite writes.
hugzzz
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Firequeen this is why I am such an avid fan, you are remarkable.
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well thank you.
thank you for both the comment and the applause.
so glad your enjoying my poems
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