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The One That Got Away

My line pulls tight,
A good one here,
My heart is pounding,
Reel it in... there

I see it now,
My biggest ever,
Oh no, what a moment
for my line to sever

I stumble back
and splash, I'm in,
To lose a fish that big
a sin

The fish brushes against my leg
as if to say in spite,
You'll not be having me for dinner,
Go hungry tonight

This has become a war now,
I try to grab the fish,
Its slippery scales elude me,
I want it on my dish

I make another lunge,
But barely touch its scales,
It swims off slowly but not before
a good slap of its tail

I drag my bedraggled sopping self
back upon the dock,
Sigh and look at my watch,
Oh no, its six o clock

I trudge home soaking wet,
Tell my husband 'bout my day,
He laughed and said I've heard that story
The one that got away

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  • Samplette gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    A delightful story. You had me caught for the entire read. Thank you for entering, very nicely done.
    Sam


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 11, 2008

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    yeah..

    there's many a story been told..like to hear one? here it go..l.o.l. love this very detailed story of one, that got away!