Boring pages in my book
thats all that I have today.
Everything I do, say,and feel
always are repeated.
It is time for me
all by myself,
to face the music
and change my day.
I go through life
in the same routine
Time is flying by
I cant seem to stop it.
Life is too short
for us to be hidden.
Abandon our skins
lets shake things up.
Stop worring about
this and that
Fill the world
with laughter and change.
Author notes
"Life's too short, babe, time is flying - I'm looking for baggage that goes with mine"
A contest entry
- Quotes from RENT!! by DramaQueen469.
550 points, ended December 22, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Why go through life unnoticed?
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hmm this is like absolutely AMAZING! Fav-fav stanza (besides ALL of them)
'Life is too short
for us to be hidden.
Abandon our skins'
Love that, the image that appeared in my head was very cool. Good line structure, diction and imagery dude.
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hidden dreams so deeply inside. not a soul to know but myself. sad dreams never to become true inpossible dreams never to go threw. so hidden inside that one day the box will lock and my hopes will fade.
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I really liked your interpetation of the song quote. Nicely done!
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Awesome!! I love this, you've done a really cool poem from the quote! WELL DONE and good luck!!
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i love what you did with the prompt, it's a fantastic poem, very well written, and it would speak to so many people cause i think most people have felt that way, and want to start to fly, best of luck in the contest
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