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Basement Below

Wooden doors and
Descending stairways
Darkness beyond the threshold

Rusting pipes
Whiff of coal dust
Mysterious passageways

Glowing furnace
Creaking floor joists
Strange lights on strings

One way out

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Chapter 20.

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  • Bob Fox
    November 11, 2008

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    Perfect

    The vision you have painted with your pen is one of perfection poet. The basement that gives us that cold chill.