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Blue Dove

Mary sweet Mary with sparkling eyes
such a smile it lit up the skies
she told a tale of Doves of Blue
sat at her window she often viewed

Telling me once they were a mistake
and not really Doves but merely a fake,
but not for a minute did I believe
as I know those Doves were as real as real.

I'm sure you'll agree that Blue Doves are rare
coming for a lady with a heart full of care
So hushed they perched in a beautiful glow
amongst the flora their brood did grow.

Sent from another of that I am sure
to sparkle the eyes of a lady so pure
Going now where blue Doves reside
with sender, deliverer loved by her side

La Paloma Azul dear little bird of blue,
fly along home now to your hearts treasures true


Author notes

Dear Karas, I am so sorry about your very sad loss and send my sincere sympathy and much love, you must be so very shocked .. the date you mentioned 7th November I was at a funeral for an Aunt, so I was prompted to write .. an unexpected loss, will be very sadly missed ~ for you dear Karas

This is from a conversation from a dear Aunt Mary 95 about the birds she loved outside her window She passed away twelve months ago 1st November 2008 .. only found her the last four years of her life but that time will always be very precious to me .. thankyou dear Angel for enabling me to remember her (1st November~ All Saints Day xxx

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  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    October 30

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    A very nice tribute to this aunt
    Thank you for sharing your thoughts and memories; this is a wonderful sharing to this contest
    Light and love,
    Heavenly


  • penman gold member
    February 20
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well done. Thank you for sharing


  • Rose Angel gold member
    December 2, 2008

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    Tender and uniquely beautiful write of comfort, and peace for those who would mourn...Rhyme and flow also lovely...It so mirrors your own peace loving character that attracts so many!...


  • a cry of stream
    November 19, 2008
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    really beautiful

  • Amethyst MoonShadow
    November 11, 2008

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    Sorry for the loss but these words must have did justice in remembrance of such a special lady. Wonderful to read such warming words.


  • Elfin
    November 11, 2008

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    This is beautiful, beautiful Libs and profoundly sad.
    Could I only send you blue doves Libi you know that I would. Good luck in this contest. Val xx


    • libithina
      November 30, 2008
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      Thanks Val s
      yes, a very lovely lady
      All love Lib x x x

  • mew2
    November 11, 2008
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    this isnice and getle it warmed up my bones

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