You look ino her c lear green eyes
See the truth illustrating the million lies
Listen to her ringing voice
Feel as though you have no choice
It shakes just enough to tell you she's not there
Her mind and heart are somewhere elsewhere
Claims she loves you and wants to stay
You buy it all at the end of the day
Refusing to believe that maybe it's all a lie
You know the truth deep down inside
But you can't leave, you need her so bad
No matter what it's worth the pain to be had
This inexplicable yearning for her touch
Damn you just love that girl so much
She laughs and says you are the only one
When she met you that's when life begun
And then again the late night phone calls
Does it's best to discredit it all
Still you smile and pretend you believe the lies
Cause without her you would lose your light
And your world would be shrouded in darkness
And there are some things just not worth it
Author notes
you pretend to belive her cause in the end you caint leave her
A contest entry
- Quotes from RENT!! by DramaQueen469.
550 points, ended December 22, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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Nicely Done!!!
I love the emotion!

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Wow. Powerful, amazing, emotive, and just plain GOOD!! Well done, and good luck in the contest!
~*~DramaQueen469~*~


