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You look ino her c lear green eyes
See the truth illustrating the million lies

Listen to her ringing voice
Feel as though you have no choice

It shakes just enough to tell you she's not there
Her mind and heart are somewhere elsewhere

Claims she loves you and wants to stay
You buy it all at the end of the day

Refusing to believe that maybe it's all a lie
You know the truth deep down inside

But you can't leave, you need her so bad
No matter what it's worth the pain to be had

This inexplicable yearning for her touch
Damn you just love that girl so much

She laughs and says you are the only one
When she met you that's when life begun

And then again the late night phone calls
Does it's best to discredit it all

Still you smile and pretend you believe the lies
Cause without her you would lose your light

And your world would be shrouded in darkness
And there are some things just not worth it

Author notes

you pretend to belive her cause in the end you caint leave her

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  • wohadreambig
    November 25, 2008
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    Nicely Done!!! I love the emotion!


  • DramaQueen469 gold member
    November 11, 2008

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    Wow. Powerful, amazing, emotive, and just plain GOOD!! Well done, and good luck in the contest!

    ~*~DramaQueen469~*~