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A game, a hunt





Your life passed as a game, a hunt,
How many preys will you be able to make endure?
before in your turn pain strikes you down,
and nobody have any more feeling to give you.






















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~spiritualangel~

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  • McRae by nature
    November 24, 2008

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    Loved the twisted darkness on these lines. The what goes around will come back to bite you in the @$$ feeling.

    Thanks
    Carrie