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Tale in the Leaves

A rain of November leaves,
In truth we know,
But in reflection we deny.
Simple chill,
Empty lies,
Terrible illusions,
But the moon will know.
We stare and hold out our hands to touch,
But too late, too cold,
Leave the broken story in the dead leaves,
It's time to dress for winter.

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  • November-Dani
    November 23, 2008

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    November. The best month of them all.
    I love your style of writing, incredible stuff.
    Awesome work.
    Dani.


  • etoile
    November 17, 2008

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    i liked the ending, this was a nice take on the prompt. the imagery was also very nice especially near the end.
    i loved the second last line, it was amazing and beautifully written.

    thanks for entering and goodluck