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Cheesecake

After Narrelle's cheesecake,
I glanced at my pink snow flake,
Will you be my drop of rain?
because of you I feel no more pain.

After some Jacobs coffee,
I glanced at my cheeks of toffee.
My black butterfly,
When were you ever a chrysalis?

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Composed on a whim after Sunday launch for Narelle Hendricks

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