Groaning in agony and pain from a life,
Only seen through the eyes of one,
Doubting if anyone will know.
Author notes
Ok i'm not sure where this poem came from but i like it so i'll enter it.
The contest was fantastic it inspired me to write a poem that even i don't fully understand, i hope you like it as much as i do.
Blessed Be
xoxoxox
A contest entry
- Adult Graphic Warning -- Truly a Dark Quickie (Pic is up) by SuicidalLover.
525 points, ended November 12, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I always read the homepage on someone who comments on one of my pieces before going to one of theirs. I have a couple friends in Australia that communicate with me here. I have found them to be pretty good buddies over these last years at AP. This little moment about lonliness and aloneness couldn't really have been spoken better. Does agony and lonliness have any less impact when no one knows? I think not. It is probably intensified. Sometimes the sharing of dispair is even more heart wrenching because one finds out that although someone knows, 'they just don't care'. Great poem my friend. Be well and drop by Candor's Corner anytime, the door is always open. RC
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Well Said
I like your take on this prompt and I think I can inderstand what you were trying to get across. All the best in the contest, Michele
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