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Bastard

When you’ve taken all, what then
has your thirst been quenched
Do you rest easy with my vision
despicable intentions fulfilled
Then you are the tortured one   


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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    I like the darker thoughts that pour within this write of yours..
    Raw punches pulled
    Best wishes to you
    Julie


  • thebest
    November 11, 2008
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    i like it! it made me want to punch a wall.. which is awesome!!! XD


  • RareFlower
    November 11, 2008

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    depth

    I loved the baseness of your write. full of darkness and anger. loved the line' despicable intentions fulfilled' thanks for a good read!


    • Yorkshire kevin
      November 12, 2008
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      HIYA
      Thank you for your comments and congratulations to the winners of this contest
      best wishes
      KEVIN