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These Are The Stairs

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                              _i
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        into my s/o/u/l that  [ascends]      i-n-t-o                  ^^^^^
                                                                                ^^^^^^^^
                    the ///h/e/a/v/e/n/s\\\  *********^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^               
                                                                             
                                                                                                                                                   


Author notes

This is my second attempt at 'Clean Pretty'/Dark Pretty! Darkwell is an excellent writer & teacher! I honest don't know how you all do this style of art!

**** I had a wonderful design but AP wouldn't accommodate me. What appears on the submit page doesn't come through on the poem page! !!! I kept going back & forth numerous times to get everything to line up properly & it never did! . Oh well, so much for my artistic attempts! I'm finished with this. This has sucked up hours of my time already!

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  • Darkwell
    November 11, 2008

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    Oh WOW this is just Awesome!!! and the background is perfect for it. you really embraced the dirty pretty the poem floats beautifully and the message is masterfully visualized!

    Wow we've got a new dirty pretty poet

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