Take my hand and walk with me
on this lovers beach of sand
there’s a frame of mind for loneliness
that some of you can’t understand
Ride beyond the midnight moon
where the stars all shine so bright
campfire flickers upon our eyes
as we talk of love and light
Take a trip away
drifting from your mind
slip away little girl
to see what you can find
Take a trip away
from this lonely place
discover who you are
in the eyes of another face
Spread your wings to fly
there’s not a moment to waste
when you land to settle down
there’s no need for any haste
All of you a part of me
I thought that you should know
all our little secrets love
in all the places that we go
Take a trip away
drifting from your mind
slip away little girl
to see what you can find
Take a trip away
from this lonely place
discover who you are
in the eyes of another face
Author notes
Silly Love Songs - dedicated to the one I love. 
A contest entry
- Silly love songs by ml12.
550 points, ended November 15, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thanks for the entry! There were some great lines in there such as "discover who you are in the eyes of another" and overall it was impressive. The metaphors were good and you have structure this well. Cheers
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This is beautiful, wish I could hear it sung, its the kind of thing my teenage daughter would love, the rhyme is so easy, it just oozes, like toothpaste on a morning, I relly loved this, thanks for sharing
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sweet
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i really enjoy your sons, they are so well written, i sometimes wish i could hear them, another great write here, best of luck in the contest
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Such beautiful words that might be silly to another, but mean so much to me. Your words do hold a magical tune all on their own. Best wishes with this my darling.
Ra.
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