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Heady scent
of fallen leaf
an autumn quilt  
for mother nature

Heavy dew
turns to frost
cold winds blow
in silence

Frigid rains
heavy in duration
laced with ice crystal
in the seasons change

Songbirds take flight
from this barren place
in the circle of life
where we shall stay
























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Autumn

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  • etoile
    November 17, 2008

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    this is very nice. the imagery is beautiful and i liked your take on the prompt.
    i loved the second stanza, it was my favourite.

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 11, 2008

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    This is beautiful, free verse and picture perfect. You did an amazing job with this my darling.
    Best of luck in this contest.

    Ra