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[ Opalescent tears ]

Opalescent tears
carve furrows,
Skin of finest china
bleeding at the touch

Tainted memories
jaded dreams,
Spider coated flesh
crawls at the sensation

Mind screaming
NO DADDY!!!
I can't take anymore!
Demons shred the words

All that is left,
Fear and guilt,
Lost in a vast empty world
Numb

Author notes

im chosing option three and about lust, sick sick lust... however this poem is not written about me... it happened to a friend of mine... well quite a few actually... its surprising how common it is... and disgusting. but one friend in particular while i was writing this piece.

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    Harsh, very hasrh.
    And considering it didn't happen to you, worded very very well.

    The second to last line is great- and so true.